Does Josiah communicate effectively?

2. Scope This report will address the issues that commuters might face with the expansion of Singapore Mass Rapid Transit network, as well as how an interactive board will aide commuters with journey planning and real-time updates with a variety of options. 3. Problem Statement Prior to the implementation of the new MRT network lines, it should be mandatory to provide commuters with a dynamic interactive board that provides up to date information to help them be more flexible in choosing different routes to the same destination as well as adapt to a more complex MRT network system. 4. Purpose Statement The purpose of this proposal is to demonstrate to LTA the effectiveness of sMaRT (smart Media active Response Television) in enabling commuters to easily access information according to their needs. Consequently, the proposal will also highlight the benefits of installing sMaRT and what is recommended by our team.  ...

I felt that the presentation was a good dry run for what we can expect in the actual presentation. It exposed us to uncertainties and angles of the project that we were not able to prepare for. Majority of the questions asked were from a perspective that we did not think of and it caught us off guard. This shows that you can always prepare for the presentation by understanding different points of view. I feel that the two aspects that I can improve in are, the manner of delivery and the teamwork during the presentation In terms of delivery, I felt that I may have rattled on about a certain problem or situation more than once. This made the presentation draggy at certain points and the audience would tend to disconnect after a while. It did not really occur to me that the audience has disconnected as well. I should cut the point and elaborate on a scenario instead. With regards to teamwork, we did not really support each other well while we were presenting. Instead, we all stood s...